Mam napisać e-mail do kolegi/koleżanki opisujący akcję ratowniczą...

Mam napisać e-mail do kolegi/koleżanki opisujący akcję ratowniczą podczas powodzi, w której to akcji brałem udział jako wolontariusz.

Spróbowałem własnych sił i coś udało mi się napisać, pozostaje jednak pytanie czy wszystko jest poprawnie gramatycznie?

Hi Kate,
I'm writing to tell you that last week I had a chance to work as a volunteer. It was unbelievably hard!
In my city, Tarnów there was a huge natural disaster, flood. One week ago started a heavy rainfall which was completely normal but after three days it wasn't. Many houses was destroyed, cars swam on the street and many people just escaped from their houses to safe their life! Local authorities started rescue operation which I helped. Me and my neighbour have a boat so we swam to nearly houses and helped other citizens in escape from their houses and bring them to the safe place. I was really frightened when i saw all of destruction but I known that i must calm and rescued other people.

That was horrible experience but today i'm really proud of myself that i helped others. It's really good feeling. In the future I will be volunteer too of course if i had an occasion. I hope you will be too.

That;s all for now. Write soon.
Best wishes,
XYZ

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